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雅思写作第二次记录,目标分7。

作者:雅思写作第二次记录,目标分7。

这次总用了51分钟,这次给了6.5,后面特花了3分钟检查单复数,自己就发现很多错误。 下面是自己的错误笔记总结。还没深入去分析优化过后的文章,明天继续。 1. 不要说 "learning about knowledge" ❌ learning about knowledge ✅ gaining knowledge 📌 规则:不要把 learn / study 和 knowledge 搭配! 改用 gain、acquire 或 expand one’s knowledge 更学术自然。 💡 好句示例: The course helped me gain valuable knowledge. Students should aim to expand their knowledge of the subject. 2. to 后面要接动词,不是名词 ❌ impossible for students to success ✅ impossible for students to succeed 📌 规则:to 后面接动词原形(infinitive),success 是名词,要改成 succeed。 💡 好句示例: Hard work allows people to succeed. He is likely to succeed in his new role. 4. well-know → well-known ❌ a well-know entrepreneur ✅ a well-known entrepreneur 📌 规则:well- 作前缀时,后面必须跟过去分词形式(-ed / -en 等)。 💡 好句示例: It is a well-known fact. She is a well-respected teacher.

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